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Gotham City Sirens Ch. 01

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by Grobnar03/06/15

Potential

I see there's some potential here, but I think this chapter is a little random in execution. Improving story flow would help clarify things. Also, the bra sizing is off. 14DD...well let's start with 14....that's as big around as a two liter soda bottle. I doubt Harley is that thin. I think 32-36 is more appropriate and so forth.

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by Anonymous03/13/15

14dd

A 14dd is actually quite large in Aus sizing - a 14 being actually considered somewhat chunky ...

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