The Marriage Ch. 03

Your stories are better than most on this site.

You might need an editor, but you most certainly know how to write an effective story, with characters that ingratiate themselves. While I can certainly see ways to make the story more complex and compelling (there isn't enough "danger" for the characters -- it's too perfect) this particular series contains the seeds for a good novel. Despite its simplicity and too-heavy reliance on things just "working out for the better", I am really looking forward to more in this series.

Dont stop

Keep going ... I am enjoying it

More

I am enjoying this reading. Just keep it coming. Thank you. OH!!!!! I like how you explain before the buildup comes. There is more excitement to come, I am sure.

I am firmly reassured

that with the volume of chapters yet to come, there will be PLENTY of tension and conflict. I am really happy with this story so far, and appreciate the timely chapter posts. I bet AFTER this is fully uploaded, I can see myself rereading from start to finish, savoring the flow of it, without interruption.

Thanks DC, for being one of the best authors still here on this site!
Lovin' it!

Lovin' It!

Another great chapter! I loved the reference in the author's note for Joseph's Technicolor Dreamcoat. That was a blast from the past :) Thanks again, DreamCloud!

MastersWench

I am really enjoying this story. It will be interesting to see how 'asshole' Uri fleshes out.

Very enjoyable

Full of interesting ideas plus a light touch so far on the erotic. The princess is correct, once there is a baby Prince Uri will stop worrying.

make no mistake

A woman's idea of 'equal' should never be confused with a man's definition of the word. It's rather like the old Russian proverb, "Trust but verify"..........

Well my friend, that's three. Don't know if I'll finish before I have to go to bed. Work tomorrow. Just can't put it down.

So Good!

Only gets better as it goes.

A very enjoyable fairy tale. Thank You.

I vote for some great drama. How about Uri rapes Mylle, to break her of being a Lesbian, of course, becoming the arch enemy of Cayden and his lovers. Sensing the turmoil, the other prick King nearby attacks, thinking to divide and conquer. But in the heat of defeat Uri arrives to save Cayden, giving up his own life in the process. Cayden then become king of both kingdoms, and everyone lives happily ever after. Until Lancelot shows up and fucks Angelica's brains out.

Wait, I think I'm confusing stories. Just stick with what you've got planned. Way better than the king's wife becoming a whore plot. Unless the king is named Kennedy, then he deserves it.

Good chapter

I`m still haven`t found what I`m looking for...(a definitive solution to my future life).
5* for you