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So all those women
And not one of them knees him in the balls and then throws her fist into his larynx killing him? Too bad. That would have been a good ending to this drivel.
dear annony. YOu should take your own advise
and die!!! gave it a 5
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I think your story would be more a tolerated in the BDSM section
Goodish
This is a mostly good story but the chapters should be longer and cliffhangers are good but you dont need ever chapter to be one
Using violence as a training method is too easy.
Not to mention the results aren't guaranteed. A I've all, if you're training "world class courtesans", then you have to be very protective of the merchandise. Have you ever seen what happens to a whipped dog? It pisses itself whenever it is scared, which is all the time...same with women. Or it becomes violent and untrustworthy. And the market for high class whores is genius at best because in the end, who wants some wrinkled, scarred, broken sex slave?
good but...
I like your writing style.
you've got great charaters and an interesting story.
However, the chapters are too short.I just got my attention grabbed and boom-it's over.The chapters for a story like this should be 2 or 3 pages.
I would also like to know more about this trainer.
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