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Intriguing
Tense lead-up, nice result. A penis loves to be in a good mouth.
Nice!
Tense and Very descriptive, nice build up but climax over to quick. (And in the end...)
Very erotic encounter
When readers wish your story was longer you know you've done a good job. Well done.
I understand
that some readers may find the climax I this story a little abrupt. What I was attempting to do was give a real account of a true incident which was exciting, surprising but not an every which way 3 hour sexual encounter. For now, my stories are drawn from life and my first tentative explorations with sex with men. All of them were hot, but none of them were perfect. I wouldn't expect everyone to find what they want in them. But glad people have found them tense, and I appreciate all honest comments.
the thrill of your first head job given with lust isnever fsr from your head or heart. i crave it every day.
Don't you?
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