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Busted At the Mall

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by Anonymous

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by Silenus63603/06/15

Distraction

Spellcheck, please, please, please? Quick! Before the Grammer Police show up and abuse you!

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by Anonymous03/06/15

Bad grammar

English is not my mother tongue but even I can see so many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors that I became quite distracted from the story.

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by mel_pomene03/06/15

A nice story ...

... but you shouldn't trust your spell-checker to do your re-reading for you. There were five instances of 'cloths', rather than 'clothes' alone.

If you had enabled scoring I would have given this four stars. Thank you, and please bring us more.

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by HornyVikingMN03/07/15

Two Words:

Editor. Please.

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by Anonymous03/08/15

HOT TEACHER flashing yough BLACK BOYS

I would love a storie about a red hot white teacher named DENISE but all her young black students call her DENISETHEPIECE. DENISE is 26 years old 107 lbs 5'2'tall '.with 44 DD'S big hard white titts.DENISE teaches at an all black high school for rough angry black nigger boys.Every day Denise shows off her HOT LEGGS,her BLACK MASTER is L.T. 225lbs. 6'2''tall with an 11'' big black cock but he's only 16 years old an he;s her black student. MASTER LT makes his white whore teacher dress to make all young niggers hard everyday.All dresses have to be al least 10'' above the top of her knees, an she needs to swing her hot white ass when she walks .The young gangniggers are all around her all day long. MASTER LT. took her to the local swimming pool to show her off to every young nigger at the school dressed in a tough swimm stuit, all young niggers got rock hard black cocks an about 10 young gangniggers took the hot white bitch teacher to the mens room for a blow jobs an gangbang.In the end DENISETHEPIECE had 15 loads of BLACK CUM on her white whore face. MASTER LT made her waer all that BLACK CUM all the way home. Please write this storie about DENISE an her blacl boys.

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