story stayed a fantasy. There is nothing wrong with fantasizing. I am glad the writer tells us up front. I can understand how a chaste wife can make a guy fantasize about what she would do under certain circumstances. Of course no one would want that to become reality. Thanks for sharing
Like @starmanfive I also looked at this story as a fantasy...But as a fantasy that is developed in our imagination, the end should be the one the imagination desired...Just to answer your question: What imagination wanted that she cheated and lied and hide it? Not the husband's!!! If the husband imagination liked this fantasies, he would like for her to come clean...Now, if the imagination was the wife's, that's another matter...
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Anonymous03/06/15
Neither
A husband doesn't want to be married to a cheating cunt pig!
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Anonymous03/06/15
She would tell her husband
She's a sub, but that doesn't make her oblivious to the fact that her husband is turned on by the way she serves other men. His dominance of her would draw out the truth and they'd both benefit. He may direct her next time.
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Anonymous03/06/15
Divorce
#1
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Anonymous03/06/15
5 love it
great story
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Anonymous03/06/15
Be careful what you wish for
I know this is a fantasy, I had similar ones. I used to imagine my proper and faithful wife in all kinds of situations with other men. Many times as I was fucking her I would picture other men doing the same thing and it was a tremendous turn on. I never thought, however, that she would ever really be unfaithful.
One night at a party, we were having a great time and both of us had had too much to drink. Carol is slender and attractive with long blonde hair and a nice body with almost "C" boobs. One of the men at the party, Bill, who had been flirting heavily with her all night, mentioned to me how nice she looked in her light blue dress. I said that "yes she did" and, for some reason I still don't understand, told him that she always coordinated her lingerie and everything under the dress was also light blue. Later, Carol and I were dancing when Bill, also pretty drunk, asked her if it was true that her panties matched her dress. They bantered back and forth, one thing led to another and he asked her to show them to him. She laughed and pulled up the dress showing Bill her ass covered by a pair of sexy light blue nylon panties. He reached out and fondled her ass for a few seconds. A few minutes later he came back and said he had only seen the back of her panties. Too my great surprise, she lifted up the front of her dress. Bill cupped her pussy briefly and gave her a big kiss. I couldn't believe that I had a raging hard on from watching this guy grope my wife.
A little while later, I was really feeling the effects of too much alcohol so I went out on the patio and laid down on a lounge. I was lying by a sliding glass door into one of the bedrooms. The drapes were open about a foot and I saw Carol walk through the bedroom to the bathroom. When she came out, Bill was between her and the door. He started flirting with her and said that while he had seen that her panties matched her dress what about her bra. He just reached out, unzipped her dress and pulled it down to her waist. As they engaged in a kiss he pushed the dress to the floor leaving her in just bra and panties. I don't know exactly what happened next because my head was spinning and I had to lay back and close my eyes. When I looked again, the bra was gone. As shocked as I was, I still noticed how awesome she looked standing there in just panties. She put up a mild protest as he pushed her to her knees. She proceeded to kiss lick and suck his cock. He very quickly came in her mouth and she swallowed which is something she never did for me. I was furious and tried to get up but the room was spinning too much. I had to lie there and watch as he brought her back to the room three more times, stripped her naked each time and fucked her brains out. When I was finally able to get on my feet the next morning, I found her in the shower down on her knees with his cock in her mouth.
When we got home, Carol was crying and apologizing and saying she would never ever do anything like that again. All the years when I was fantasizing about her with someone else I never thought it would actually happen and when it did, I didn't like it at all. She has never done anything like that since, in fact, she seldom even flirts anymore. It took a good while for me to get past this but now I do get really turned on whenever I picture her down on her knees wearing only those light blue panties sucking Bill's cock. The moral is, be careful about what you fantasize about or think you want because you might not like it if it happens.
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Anonymous03/06/15
Get Real
She is a sub and her husband, who wants to hear the juicy details a cluck....
Ending #1 and also agree that it should remain fantasy
On this group, too many people get bent out of shape about these stories when probably 99% of them are fantasy in the author's mind. Good that this stayed in the realm of fantasy. Ending #1 would be better for her to come clean, and not add deceit and lying to her guiltiness, as Ending #2 would imply.
5 *'s
And thankfully you can spell and use words correctly in sentences.
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Anonymous03/06/15
Yes.
If he had a monster dick, it would turn him on, and turn on all the readers with comments.It isnt that once this whore, like all of them like this are. You know as they say, once you go back, its not that they want take you back. Once you go back, they wont take you back. Women are smart, they stay with the men who gets a handout. I guess I will hear from The brainwashed devils comments.
Don't think I've run into your style on Lit before. Wonder about giving choice of endings; I like to have a complete story--one that I can suspend belief on page one and stay in that state until the end. Still, you did a good job of telling your story. I do wonder how many others suspect you were telling a story based on an actual event, even though you implied it is fiction.
Buddy, if you are not already a Lit author and member, you need to join up and start writing. Your comment was well written and with just a LITTLE work, could be turned into one of the best LW story of the last few months. If you need help with it, contact me thru my bio and submissions page. YOU HAVE POSSIBILITIES!
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Anonymous03/06/15
She was, is, or could be, be a filthily fucked hotwife! Love it.
I've been slipping it to a wifey "getting some space" tonight here in Atlanta. When I teased her about hubby and how he'd feel if he knew that I was twisting and sucking and spitting on her tight erect nipples she assured me that all American husbands are wimp ass castrated closet cucks. 5*
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Anonymous03/06/15
I would choose
To kill both of these cheating filthy whores by tying them up and slowly burning them alive, thus cleansing the world of them. I would also hope you are burned alive for creating them you cum sucking fag.
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Anonymous03/06/15
I prefer she gets AIDS from her whoring around and dies
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Anonymous03/07/15
My vote
I prefer ending number 1. I particularly look forward to her telling her husband how she was ready to permit Mario liberties she refuses her own husband. How deliciously torturous for hubby to know that other men might experience what she withholds from him.
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Anonymous03/07/15
Ending 1, and take the consequences for her actions, when it finally comes to light....
....maybe John is OK with it, as long as she tells all. Maybe he throws her out, having crossed a line at the limit of his tolerance.
Maybe he invites his boss and co-workers over and puts her to work satisfying them for hours on end each week to advance his career. Perhaps instead, he allows her to stay, but they move away and start over.
Perhaps he disappears into the fog one morning, ostensibly leaving for work, but never arrives. When the call comes from his boss at nearly 10am, she panics, because John has always been ultra-reliable....and said nothing, even seemed calm, after her "confession". Three months later, she moves home with her parents, giving up the small cottage she shared with John. He's gone and not coming back. She realizes that her willingness to comfort men with bonkers was a poor choice and has left her a lone woman. Oh, well. She'll just take another trip and allow herself to be picked up and seduced again. Perhaps it will lead somewhere this time.....
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Anonymous03/08/15
I did tell her it would have been OK to go. I said, "he was after your ass."
Just stupid. No plot. Is the drama wondering what a slut and cuckold will do when the opportunity presents itself? Then you must think what happens when a bitch in heat meets a male hound is dramatic and interesting. Its just base and pathetic that anyone would consider this interesting erotica. Just another day at the zoo, watching the animals fuck.
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Anonymous03/09/15
Re: my vote
and this is why the world is rapidly going to hell!
Nice that this
story stayed a fantasy. There is nothing wrong with fantasizing. I am glad the writer tells us up front. I can understand how a chaste wife can make a guy fantasize about what she would do under certain circumstances. Of course no one would want that to become reality. Thanks for sharing
Like @starmanfive...
Like @starmanfive I also looked at this story as a fantasy...But as a fantasy that is developed in our imagination, the end should be the one the imagination desired...Just to answer your question: What imagination wanted that she cheated and lied and hide it? Not the husband's!!! If the husband imagination liked this fantasies, he would like for her to come clean...Now, if the imagination was the wife's, that's another matter...
Neither
A husband doesn't want to be married to a cheating cunt pig!
She would tell her husband
She's a sub, but that doesn't make her oblivious to the fact that her husband is turned on by the way she serves other men. His dominance of her would draw out the truth and they'd both benefit. He may direct her next time.
Divorce
#1
5 love it
great story
Be careful what you wish for
I know this is a fantasy, I had similar ones. I used to imagine my proper and faithful wife in all kinds of situations with other men. Many times as I was fucking her I would picture other men doing the same thing and it was a tremendous turn on. I never thought, however, that she would ever really be unfaithful.
One night at a party, we were having a great time and both of us had had too much to drink. Carol is slender and attractive with long blonde hair and a nice body with almost "C" boobs. One of the men at the party, Bill, who had been flirting heavily with her all night, mentioned to me how nice she looked in her light blue dress. I said that "yes she did" and, for some reason I still don't understand, told him that she always coordinated her lingerie and everything under the dress was also light blue. Later, Carol and I were dancing when Bill, also pretty drunk, asked her if it was true that her panties matched her dress. They bantered back and forth, one thing led to another and he asked her to show them to him. She laughed and pulled up the dress showing Bill her ass covered by a pair of sexy light blue nylon panties. He reached out and fondled her ass for a few seconds. A few minutes later he came back and said he had only seen the back of her panties. Too my great surprise, she lifted up the front of her dress. Bill cupped her pussy briefly and gave her a big kiss. I couldn't believe that I had a raging hard on from watching this guy grope my wife.
A little while later, I was really feeling the effects of too much alcohol so I went out on the patio and laid down on a lounge. I was lying by a sliding glass door into one of the bedrooms. The drapes were open about a foot and I saw Carol walk through the bedroom to the bathroom. When she came out, Bill was between her and the door. He started flirting with her and said that while he had seen that her panties matched her dress what about her bra. He just reached out, unzipped her dress and pulled it down to her waist. As they engaged in a kiss he pushed the dress to the floor leaving her in just bra and panties. I don't know exactly what happened next because my head was spinning and I had to lay back and close my eyes. When I looked again, the bra was gone. As shocked as I was, I still noticed how awesome she looked standing there in just panties. She put up a mild protest as he pushed her to her knees. She proceeded to kiss lick and suck his cock. He very quickly came in her mouth and she swallowed which is something she never did for me. I was furious and tried to get up but the room was spinning too much. I had to lie there and watch as he brought her back to the room three more times, stripped her naked each time and fucked her brains out. When I was finally able to get on my feet the next morning, I found her in the shower down on her knees with his cock in her mouth.
When we got home, Carol was crying and apologizing and saying she would never ever do anything like that again. All the years when I was fantasizing about her with someone else I never thought it would actually happen and when it did, I didn't like it at all. She has never done anything like that since, in fact, she seldom even flirts anymore. It took a good while for me to get past this but now I do get really turned on whenever I picture her down on her knees wearing only those light blue panties sucking Bill's cock. The moral is, be careful about what you fantasize about or think you want because you might not like it if it happens.
Get Real
She is a sub and her husband, who wants to hear the juicy details a cluck....
Ending #1 and also agree that it should remain fantasy
On this group, too many people get bent out of shape about these stories when probably 99% of them are fantasy in the author's mind. Good that this stayed in the realm of fantasy. Ending #1 would be better for her to come clean, and not add deceit and lying to her guiltiness, as Ending #2 would imply.
5 *'s
And thankfully you can spell and use words correctly in sentences.
Yes.
If he had a monster dick, it would turn him on, and turn on all the readers with comments.It isnt that once this whore, like all of them like this are. You know as they say, once you go back, its not that they want take you back. Once you go back, they wont take you back. Women are smart, they stay with the men who gets a handout. I guess I will hear from The brainwashed devils comments.
DIFFERENT BUT GOOD!
Don't think I've run into your style on Lit before. Wonder about giving choice of endings; I like to have a complete story--one that I can suspend belief on page one and stay in that state until the end. Still, you did a good job of telling your story. I do wonder how many others suspect you were telling a story based on an actual event, even though you implied it is fiction.
RE; careful what you wish for.
Buddy, if you are not already a Lit author and member, you need to join up and start writing. Your comment was well written and with just a LITTLE work, could be turned into one of the best LW story of the last few months. If you need help with it, contact me thru my bio and submissions page. YOU HAVE POSSIBILITIES!
She was, is, or could be, be a filthily fucked hotwife! Love it.
I've been slipping it to a wifey "getting some space" tonight here in Atlanta. When I teased her about hubby and how he'd feel if he knew that I was twisting and sucking and spitting on her tight erect nipples she assured me that all American husbands are wimp ass castrated closet cucks. 5*
I would choose
To kill both of these cheating filthy whores by tying them up and slowly burning them alive, thus cleansing the world of them. I would also hope you are burned alive for creating them you cum sucking fag.
I prefer she gets AIDS from her whoring around and dies
My vote
I prefer ending number 1. I particularly look forward to her telling her husband how she was ready to permit Mario liberties she refuses her own husband. How deliciously torturous for hubby to know that other men might experience what she withholds from him.
Ending 1, and take the consequences for her actions, when it finally comes to light....
....maybe John is OK with it, as long as she tells all. Maybe he throws her out, having crossed a line at the limit of his tolerance.
Maybe he invites his boss and co-workers over and puts her to work satisfying them for hours on end each week to advance his career. Perhaps instead, he allows her to stay, but they move away and start over.
Perhaps he disappears into the fog one morning, ostensibly leaving for work, but never arrives. When the call comes from his boss at nearly 10am, she panics, because John has always been ultra-reliable....and said nothing, even seemed calm, after her "confession". Three months later, she moves home with her parents, giving up the small cottage she shared with John. He's gone and not coming back. She realizes that her willingness to comfort men with bonkers was a poor choice and has left her a lone woman. Oh, well. She'll just take another trip and allow herself to be picked up and seduced again. Perhaps it will lead somewhere this time.....
I did tell her it would have been OK to go. I said, "he was after your ass."
Just stupid. No plot. Is the drama wondering what a slut and cuckold will do when the opportunity presents itself? Then you must think what happens when a bitch in heat meets a male hound is dramatic and interesting. Its just base and pathetic that anyone would consider this interesting erotica. Just another day at the zoo, watching the animals fuck.
Re: my vote
and this is why the world is rapidly going to hell!
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