I enjoyed the way you used the triads in the first two stanzas and the concept of becoming more than the sum of the parts.
well done, you have given a excellent description of a sub emerging. you describe the realization, and coming to terms with being a sub, and the longing and for and surrendering to a dom, your dom must take good care of you . he is quite lucky.
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