- All
Comments (8) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Nope
A master would never endanger his slave or sub like that. This guy is an abusive psychopath. Wrong category.
Wow! Seven stories in one day. Not a good idea.
You should consider working on quality and not quantity. All the stories seem to be quick hitters that read basically the same with some plot variation. In none of them (note the low scores) do you create characters that are interesting or believable. Yes. This is fiction but even in fiction there has to be some connection to reality to draw the reader into the story. Listening to your cardboard characters spout inane dialogue is as interesting as reading a "how to" manual about assembling a piece of IKEA furniture. You might want to consider a good editor. None of these seven stories were worth the time spent reading them.
Response
Thanks for your feedback. I'm so sorry that my stories were so terribly written that you had to read all of them to confirm.
treated lower than a dog
I know all about your culture. My neighbor, when his wife gave birth to a son, handed out candy to everyone. He did not do this when his wife gave birth to the daughters. He is from India.
Life is meant to be enjoyed not to be in a constant state of being tortured. In your stories, where your female character is out with the girls, she still cannot totally relax and enjoy a shopping trip. Always thinking about the monster at home who is waiting for her. How many years can a woman go living this way?
Don't you think it would be sexier for these two if they paced themselves?
Sure it is fun to be punished and tied up and all that fun stuff, but it seems like the female in your stories cannot even "let go" mentally for a half-day and just feel free.
I have been in an abusive relationship. It cannot go for too long until someone breaks.
There is a breaking point, rest assured.
Out shopping with a friend who is happy and talking about positive things...and all you can do is think about the "ass whipping" you are gonna take when you get home.
How can you even have a decent and meaningful conversation with another human being?
Always waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Living in constant dread is not sexy. It is exhausting. One day, you will just start crying and others will look at you and ask, "What is wrong? Why don't you ever talk about your personal life?"
Your female character has a shitty life! She is so far gone that she could not recognize "normal" if it reached out and slapped her on the face.
Out of place
You may comment on my story, but please leave my culture out of it. I am Indian but my male character is Caucasian. It is ignorant people like you and your stereotypes that assume that a simple written fantasy is a true account and the word of God. You are more disgusting than my story. Clearly the people who are on Literotica are more close minded than I thought.
NOT BDSM
This story does not reflect a safe, sane or consensual relationship. This "master" abandoned his submissive while she was restrained. This places her in danger, especially if there is a fire or emergency. Masters are more concerned with the safety and security of their property than with being sure their sub is sufficiently punished for their transgressions. This story would be better placed in the non-consensual category than the BDSM Category. This is a prime example of why society views the lifestyle of BDSM being abusive, cruel and not healthy.
If this is a reflection of the relationship you are in, please seek help and be sure you are safe. Nobody deserves to be treated this way regardless of their culture. Please know you deserve better and there are resources available to you.
HORRIBLE
Fucking waste of my time.
Keep it up!
Don't listen to those who don't like your story! I for one loved it please write more!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to 7 Stages of Grief or
More submissions by restrainedqueen.