The Doormat

shitty way to be treated

He treats you pretty shitty, doesn't he? Are you ever at peace, or are you constantly in a state of dread and fear? You must be mentally abused, right? So you can't go out and do anything with peace and fun in your heart, right? Always dreading what is coming up next. Not sure how old you are, but at some point this just will not work in a relationship anymore. One night, you will hover over him with a knife, while he is snoring after drinking all that beer. I bet that in your heart, you wish he would die, right?
Do you ever search the internet looking for ways to poison him? I bet that you do.

Amusing

I must say that joining Literotica was the best thing ever because it provides me with two fold pleasure. On one hand I have the opportunity to write and share stories of fantasies that I have had which is sexually gratifying. On the other hand I am constantly amused by comments like these where people fail to realize that under BDSM there may be very sadistic and masochistic individuals like myself who enjoy such roleplay of extreme punishment, pain, humiliation and degradation in their relationship. Lighten up, it is just a fantasy, this is not a website on which people report crime.

What a mess.

This feels like a pasted together story in which you cut out paragraphs from other stories, threw them into the air and then glued them together. Even for a fictional story, this was simply ludicrous and it provided nothing interesting or entertaining to read. UGH!

A suggestion

You obviously know what works for you. It is equally obvious that what you like is too much for many readers. I strongly advise not posting multiple stories at once and especially that many at once. Readers are human, too. They stare even when horrified and the reactions are magnified. Other new authors have made mass drops before and the negative reaction is common. Pace yourself.

Thanks!

Thanks so much for your constructive feedback, at least one person can reason :) I will take your advice.

I enjoy ur stories very much I don't see why there are such negative comments. You may be a little extreme for some but not me I love them all ;)

Love all you stories might be too much for some but I think they are just perfect

Thanks!

Thanks for the appreciation guys! I'm glad you like and I have much more in store :)