Atlantic City Bet

Light and wonderful story

A very nice story to start my day!

Thank you!

L

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Never had a sapphic experience to “Marry me!” in one night? Suuuuuuuure.....

Cute :) first time lesbians uhaul as soon as they figure out they are gay. It does need some editing, the point of veiw gets a little confusing, I love stories that switch between characters. Their train of thought and what they are saying out loud is hard to differentiate. When they are talking it's a bit rushed, almost a run on sentence, a little conversation editing would help it flow. A little more back story about each of the women, including Linda would add a lot. Great start to a potential romantic erotic story.