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OK, you act out your fantasy
That makes it reality, SHE IS A SLUT. He is a WACC.
She does not really worry about or even care about the WACC anymore.
If she did how about setting him up with a "school" girl or even his secretary.
OH he has his life now, everybody will know his wife is an easy fuck.
This was all consensual, but...
This was all consensual, but one thing is role play, another to expose his wife to friends that wouldn't keep the secret and soon his wife would be exposed as a slut...That showed how he didn't care about his wife reputation!!! What kind of love is this? If he wanted to act the role plays, what better time than vacation time, with people that didn't know them? so this time I give 1* for the husband...
Gross
Just plain stupid. Marriage over, no respect for wife!
love RP and the idea of
fantasies. W/O them life would be boring!! I say you go girl and if hubby likes it you both win!! Gave you a 5
OK as a fantasy story
But not with your mates from the pub! Surely the most unreliable bunch imaginable, they will spread this tale everywhere.
Writing needs a boost
Pretty standard fare with not much cleverness or imagination to be found. Rob basically allows his friends to screw his wife as part of HIS fantasy regardless of what she might want and without talking to her about it. Not good. And you don't think it was a really bad idea to include his friends in this mess? They'll NEVER let either of them forget what happened. And what happens if one of his so-called friends is carrying around some nasty disease or she gets pregnant? Even for fiction this had too many holes in the plot line to make for a good read. One star because negative stars aren't available.
Don't you have to be kind of fucked up to like a story like this?
Where's the appeal? You wish a bunch of guy were fucking your wife? You wish you and a bunch of guys were fucking one of your "friend's" wives? You wish you were the husband being cuckolded? What's erotic about slutting your wife out, or having a slut for a wife, or having a "husband" who loans you out like a hunting dog, or caring so little about your spouse that you both don't care who fucks you nor who fucks them? So, enjoy, I guess, those of you with that kind of personality. I found it just really dumb and unexplainable. Maybe your next story can take place at an institution for the mentally retarded? I think I know where you can find your first patients.
A pet peeve, but a fun, smutty story!
I've never understood how a woman who is on all fours can "feel his balls slapping against my bum with every deep thrust."
Since her bum is up in the air, and he's fucking her from behind, his balls would be slapping against her clit, not her bum, unless the guy is standing on his head while fucking her, or has his balls on top of his cock!
But who cares? A fun, smutty story. Looking forward to a reluctant but horny wife taking on Lee and his wife!
as dumb
as most plots here. iq must be below 80. they all live in the same place, have kids.....
I would not like to be a kid ot the town bike or the pimp and I would surely not want to have retarded parents.
I rarely read such a nonsense
The style is worse, the content is simply dumb and the author seems to have escaped the madhouse.
OK Woman's Fantasy
Guys have equivalent fantasies; why not women. I'm guessing you didn't write this for guys anyway.
yikes.
This was bad.
1*
Take this trash to the garbage can.
So next she does a threesome with Lee and his wifey......
.....then heads right on into the gangbangs with the boys at the local pub.
And of course, no one will ever find out and there will be no repercussions, no public response.
Really? This has to be one of the poorest of the slutwife fantasies. No thought for anything but the momentary thrill of being taken in as many ways as the writer can fit into the one, three or five page story format.
I get that some women like the thought of being out of control, but safe, hot and fucked a dozen times by men with aggressive attitudes and large cocks.....these stories almost always include her being somewhat tipsy to totally sloshed......but all I see is the morning after, filled with remorse and regret, worrying over whether her marriage will survive, and if it does, what kind of asshole husband puts her in that kind of situation.
Oh, it was fun....but who will she sneak off to fuck when she gets a little horny and hubby isn't around, when they are on the outs over so,e drivel or other? This can't end well, and the short term sense of wild abandon carries with it an equally heavy burden of guilt accompanied by the usual destructive byproducts and results that end up negatively affecting their once stable marriage.
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