hard to read when it's one giant paragraph.
I love the story but getting hit over the head with this WoT hurts... {Wall of Text} Grammar, spelling, and structure is what helps readers understand what is in the author's mind. That is why it is important. However, it is a nice read. Thank you for sharing you Force. May you eternally ask the Goddess to alight your path.
I forgot to include another suggestion. Think of a paragraph as a single moment in time, or single action during a scene. It is perfectly good to let a paragraph be one or two sentences.
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hard to read when it's one giant paragraph.
Nice
I love the story but getting hit over the head with this WoT hurts... {Wall of Text}
Grammar, spelling, and structure is what helps readers understand what is in the author's mind. That is why it is important.
However, it is a nice read. Thank you for sharing you Force. May you eternally ask the Goddess to alight your path.
addendum
I forgot to include another suggestion. Think of a paragraph as a single moment in time, or single action during a scene. It is perfectly good to let a paragraph be one or two sentences.
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