When you write a story, please use spell-check and double check your grammar before submitting it. Beside the fact that the story jumps all over the place, the grammatical errors are really annoying.
your literature style is your own, I enjoyed it! Keep up the writing, I especially enjoyed some of the more personal lines in this lover's tryst-twist tale. Keep up the good work!
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Anonymous11/19/10
Uhhh... what century are we in
where a college has a rule against pregnant women attending?
Illegal much?
English
Where did you learn English?
When you write a story, please use spell-check and double check your grammar before submitting it. Beside the fact that the story jumps all over the place, the grammatical errors are really annoying.
never mind the blokes!
your literature style is your own, I enjoyed it! Keep up the writing, I especially enjoyed some of the more personal lines in this lover's tryst-twist tale. Keep up the good work!
Uhhh... what century are we in
where a college has a rule against pregnant women attending?
Illegal much?
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