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The Marriage Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/08/15

Uri just needs some pussy. I think he would rather see Cayden naked though.

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by Anonymous03/08/15

You may have the right of it, methinks he doth protest too much! ;)

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by ariesgirl03/08/15

What is Uri's problem? Does he favor Mylle?

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by Doctime03/08/15

I doth think that 'Uri' protests too much. I think he may need a helping hand,
...perhaps from ??????

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by Doctime03/08/15

Whoops, forgot to add. Five stars all the way. Let's crash the Hall Of Fame. Doctime

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by cliquegge03/09/15

Still enjoying

Will be sad to see this finish.

Thanks

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by deadeye_7603/09/15

Excellent

I love the ebb and flow of the story and can't wait for the next installment. I love the idea of people supporting each other in this manner. Their wishes did not fit into a pre-determined mold so they made their own arrangements. Well done.

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by Anonymous03/10/15

more please!

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by bruce2203/12/15

Excellent Romance

With the exception of Uri everyone is extremely nice and the Royals do not seem to be stuck on themselves.Now I wish I had these three ladies for myself! Actually I believe I do have them in my wife of fifty years.

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by gunmaker08/04/15

OK. So far a perfect score from me. I'm limiting myself to one chapter a night. Wish you could add to this as fast as we read it.

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by GoesGrunt09/11/15

Righteous Indignation

The prince should go to his father in law and warn him that Uri verges on causing harm to the alliance...

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by TheOldRomantic09/20/16

This is a great story

Great story, but I don't see yet what is the problem with Uri. Is him in love with his sister?
As I say before:
I still haven't found what I`m looking for...
5* for you.

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Wonderful!!!

I have to agree with the comment that stated about Uri "me thinks he doth protest too much!". Wouldn't it be a hoot to find out that he too prefers a partner of his same sex? But I think he is in love with his sister or Mylle (or both). I love the arrangement they have made. I would love to see Cayden beat the living crap out of Uri. I can't believe that I will eventually run out of chapters of this story to read. Hoping that there are more in the works. As gunmaker said in his comment "Wish you could add to this as fast as we read it". Well done DreamCloud!!

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by bliss_mae01/30/17

What?

Uri ruined a perfectly lovely bath; that would have pushed me over the edge.

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