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The Replacement Slave Ch. 01

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by Anonymous03/08/15

Needs editing

Lots of simple mistakes in this. Good idea, but forced and compressed. I'll abstain from voting at this point. Just try to resolve your writing glitches.

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by mrwidehorizons03/08/15

Great start!

Can't wait to see how she uses him to punish her hubby. Great idea. Please continue!!

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by Anonymous03/09/15

Nice beginning

I like where this story is leading so far. I'm looking forward to the future chapters of how the weekend progresses. Please continue.

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