I read all four parts of your story...so I guess in reality you gave me four thrills...I like your style, it seems very realistic.
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Anonymous05/28/15
Really improving...
Your writing shows much confidence and improvement. Your casual approach to sex and the details you provide are great motivation to continue reading. Anxious to read your next installment.
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Anonymous12/09/15
Very good, hot, and now I have another fantasy.
Very exciting read all four and was so turned on I cam four times - wishing I was Ben
English
I love it
It was a great story. Very erotic
great story
Very good story, very erotic and sexy.
@ Epiphany_Jones
OK I read your comment so what's your point
@janeq67
Love your story I come here for the erotica not the english class
keep up the good work
nuguy2006
Yes, you gave me a thrill...
I read all four parts of your story...so I guess in reality you gave me four thrills...I like your style, it seems very realistic.
Really improving...
Your writing shows much confidence and improvement. Your casual approach to sex and the details you provide are great motivation to continue reading. Anxious to read your next installment.
Very good, hot, and now I have another fantasy.
Very exciting read all four and was so turned on I cam four times - wishing I was Ben
nice
Very pleasuring read!
Great series
Loved the series so far Aunty I'm stil hard wanting and waiting for the next installment.
Good sex
You never said you rode. him but you did build up a hot sex sesion it got me harrd I'm a full 9* it was good.
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