Lue to Lucy and Back Ch. 03

Just another cheating whore wife. Nothing original nothing new . A whore is a whore no matter how u say it .

A.Common Adultress

Nothing more.nothing less. Cheating on her husband and making him an involuntary cuckold.Why not cut Don loose instead.of humiliating someone you claim to love.Just a selfish woman living her life through her vagina.

A very good story about cucking. Gave you a 5

for your effort and for helping me piss off dear annony who is the biggest fucking nut job on LIt.

A boring portrayal of a determined slut. Hope it worked for you.

Not imaginative, not interesting, not entertaining. More like a psychologists report of the steps that led up to some sick person's deviance. So she finally fucked another man. She's a woman. That's about as difficult to accomplish as getting a stray dog to shit in your front yard; happens every day. Yawn. So are we done here?

speaking of dog shit how are you dear annony???

gave it a 5

Insightful

I appreciate the insight you're giving us into this woman's thoughts, which helps to explain her actions. Is she acting morally? Of course not. But could you imagine a story where every action was moral? Is that really the boring shit that people want to read? All of the annonies who are still commenting on this story really should just fuck off. It's Chapter Three. If you can't figure out what this story is about by now, you must be even dumber than I imagine.

Is this the end?

I don't know if this is the end...So I'll not comment for now...But still is a strong 1*...

Looking forward to more until we get up to the present day(?) as written

in Chapter 1. Thx for continuing your saga and love the insights into Lucy's mind/thoughts.

Yeah but tell the part of the story where she gets caught and it ruins two marriages because only a complete fool would believe they won't end up getting caught!

Thanks everybody

To those who are enjoying the story and have made the effort to tell me so, my sincere thanks.

And thanks too to those who are letting loose with their condemnation of a woman who is in the process of discovering a new side to herself. What I do find fascinating about you is that you only condemn Lue/Lucy, and occasionally Don for being a 'wimp'.

How about Ray? Isn't he cheating on Julie just as much as Lue is cheating on Don? Why no comment on him? Or is it OK for blokes to cheat, but chicks who cheat must be condemned?

At it again bonnie?

Twice you scored this story. How many times do I have to tell you, only one counts, but yet like a stupid bitch you keep doing it over and over again. Shut your fucking face bitch, nobody wants to listen to the biggest "troll" on literotica and that includes that whining ass swingerjoe. Gave it a 1 to offset your worthless meaningless score.

Why do they read if they do not like what will happen?

Good story, nice build up, enjoyed the whole thing.
I received much negative comments about my stories, suggest you ignore the 'naysayers'.
Why do they bother to read erotic stories if it upsets them?
The vast majoritiy of stories involve sex outside marriage in the two categories I read most, Loving Wives, and Exhibitionist and Voyer.
Comments should be about style content and wether the reader enjoyed the story.

the real losers are the kids.

With parents who lie,cheat, steal and don't have any remorse or regreat, just self centered justification, the kids have no chance. Their is nobody to like sordid little tale.

Both cheaters

Deserve condemnation.
Cheaters deserve what they get in the end.
Open marriages where everything is on the table and there are certain rules that are strictly adhered to are one thing; but, they as well are usually very problematic and face downfalls.

It's***

A read

Thanks

for including your feelings in the telling of this story. It is a great improvement. It breaths life into the story. I can't wait to hear how Don found out about the infidelity. I would also like to know how you treated Don while you built up the affair with Ray. Thank you!

For starmanfive

Disclosure occurs in Ch.4. It has been submitted 11/03/15.

Hello @luedon...

Just a little commente about your comment...In the 1st part I said that both were cheaters...for me don't matter who the cheater is...cheating is a bad weakness...Writers are the ones to write mostly about cheating wives, don't ask me why...

Indeed impo_60

I accept that your earlier comment included both parties to this affair, as well as concern about the effect on the children etc.

It was a small beacon in a storm of condemnation mostly biased towards the female party. As a result of my experience as a new contributor, I have become fascinated by the responses in the Loving Wives category. They show a ferocity not present in most of the other categories. I don't see much condemnation aimed at husbands having relationships with baby-sitters or co-workers in Mature or Erotic Couplings.

Thanks for continuing the discussion, I am finding it interesting. (Even Bonny's counter-attacks on her anonnys.)

"transformation from wife and mother to sexy and desirable"

So wives and mothers aren't sexy and desirable? Sounds like rationalization to me and it sounds like bunk.

In this case "sexy and desirable" must me to discard the commitments of the past, to throw them away so as to pursue the basest of drives. To join bonobo society.

This is not enlightened or evolved thinking at all. It's pure selfishness and it is destructive. Obviously the "wife" doesn't give a shit about family except for the comfort (financial emotional) that it provides and could care less who she hurts.

It's also obvious that the husband does not care about the alleged wife even though the wife still seeks to deceive.

I hope this is fiction. Want a banana?

luedon ...about your response to comment from impo_60

Your are correct in that this section is a terrible bunch to write for. For the most part, you can ignore any who only sign "Anonymous" Most have nothing constructive to say. And there are some who tear up a person's story because of moral issues. We live in an immoral society, a result of fallen mankind. These are just stories, fantasies, made up things. Most people forget this and want to bash the writer because of their content. The only thing I will count against you for is grammar, word usage, and punctuation. Many on here just plain don't know how to write in the English language. If it is erotic and carries a suspenseful story line, or results in conflict, I will complement it. I have given 1 * I have given 3 *'s, a lot of 4 *'s. Yours deserves 5 *'s in my estimation.

Thanks honeylicker1124

I do try to use decent English, and I too am turned off by the way so many contributors to this site relate their stories in language distracts from the eroticism.

There are more fascinating comments on Chapter 4, and Chapter 5 has been submitted.

After that, I think I might retire hurt.