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by yellowcab643

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not sure about the point to this story

This story/essay seems like a "resume" written in paragraph format. Not sure if anything more is planned, but I felt "left hanging" at the end. To make this better, I'd suggest providing characterization - motivations, personalities, quirks - will give the story some "excitement" to draw readers in.

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I was born in New York City. My family and I moved to Salt Lake City in 1962 and I remember being lobotomized in Michigan during the trip. I found some speed pills in my house in about 1971 and they were so strong my hard on went right down my throat. Years later in Merced,...