All Comments on 'CFNM: The College Saga Pt. 04'

by That_CFNM_Guy

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ChrispeChrispeabout 9 years ago
Too Short

You are going to lose a lot of readers if you keep submitting these very short chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Continues to be good

Still enjoying this story. It's getting good with more female assertiveness. A few typos, but I know its hard to type when you're... hard!

JacquieIsBiJacquieIsBiabout 9 years ago
Slow burner

Slow burning story I hope it speeds up a little and Chris has to strip for crissy soon and he can't hide his problem!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well described erotic story

You've got a nice style for describing the setting and characters. Love the female erotic perspective as they lord it over the forlorn men.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story!

Looking forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
WhereWhere isis partpart 5

Please?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More please

Let Chrispie quit reading. I like your story please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good start

I like the first 4 parts. Very creative, strangely erotic, with a different slant than most of the stories on this site. I can see you have an active imagination that I hope you can use to your advantage. What you have so far makes me want to read more. A few typos, especially in part 4, as if it was rushed. Remember good writing takes time and a lot of practice, just like everything else. Don't be distracted by the idiots who typically leave comments on this site.

NakedDanNakedDanabout 9 years ago

As unbelievable as this story is, I wish there was a school like this and that I had gone there. Oh well. When is the next part coming?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
where is chapter 5???

i read this yesterday and i am looking forward to future chapters. Can't wait till Chrissy sees chris naked!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Dude, you're killing me!

This is the best setup to a CFNM story I've seen in ages, particularly the slow buildup and the prospect of a male-female friendship being at the center. I've checked for the next part every day since early March, and I'm starting to despair!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I love the slow build up!

Great story so far. I love the Female supremacist aspect of the story.And hope to read about both Chris and Chrissie being indoctrinated in female supremacy

I love the idea of a college that teaches women to be leaders.And teaches the men to be naked and obedient househusbands. And where the women smugly enjoy their newfound power.And who get to relax while their naked boyfriends and male classmates wait on them hand and foot. witht he males doing their laundry and housecleaning while the female students sit back and smile while they check out and savor the male's bodies

Here's hoping that some of the female classmates go home and convert their whole family to the CFNM/Female supremacy lifestyle.And helping their Mothers and /or Sisters in enslaving their Fathers and/or brothers.And converting their formerly macho brothers and fathers into obedient and naked servants

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Also hoping for Pt. 05

I'm also hoping you continue this series and don't leave us hanging!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The Best

Probably one of the best CFNM stories I've ever read. I really wish it would continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please Continue!

We want more!

ptebadenptebadenover 7 years ago
Waiting

All of this is coming too much slowly. I hope it improves and gets hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
MORE !!

This is a classic ! Probably the best CFNM story I've ever read. Please bring out more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wise to stop ...

How can you make a realistic story ...

With pathetic males like this ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More, More, More

It's been a good couple of years.

Please write more chapters this story is just getting started.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A pity

This story has been abandoned when readers are warmed up...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Pretty slow...

All intro, for 3 stories?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I hope that there is more coming. Great stories so far

Love the story so far. Wouldlove to read more. I love how tthe girl Chrisy starts to feel more and more empowered as the story goes on. I would love to read more about the young man being humbled by her.

questionman99questionman99over 2 years ago

Why didn’t someone warn me? All build up and no story!!!

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