CFNM: The College Saga Pt. 04

Too Short

You are going to lose a lot of readers if you keep submitting these very short chapters.

Continues to be good

Still enjoying this story. It's getting good with more female assertiveness. A few typos, but I know its hard to type when you're... hard!

Slow burner

Slow burning story I hope it speeds up a little and Chris has to strip for crissy soon and he can't hide his problem!

Well described erotic story

You've got a nice style for describing the setting and characters. Love the female erotic perspective as they lord it over the forlorn men.

Great story!

Looking forward to future chapters.

WhereWhere isis partpart 5

Please?

More please

Let Chrispie quit reading. I like your story please continue it.

Good start

I like the first 4 parts. Very creative, strangely erotic, with a different slant than most of the stories on this site. I can see you have an active imagination that I hope you can use to your advantage. What you have so far makes me want to read more. A few typos, especially in part 4, as if it was rushed. Remember good writing takes time and a lot of practice, just like everything else. Don't be distracted by the idiots who typically leave comments on this site.

As unbelievable as this story is, I wish there was a school like this and that I had gone there. Oh well. When is the next part coming?