All Comments on 'For the Whored Ch. 076'

You need to make the segway parts more noticeable, i.e.: scene changes. For example:

"Then go fuck each other's brains out for all I care. Now, do you want to know how to attach the metal dick or what?"

Elunara studied a picture as she walked to the door. She looked up and rolled her eyes at Gerald. "Come in then."

--The first conversation is obviously different from the second part, but it takes a rereading to figure out what exactly happened between then & now. Put in a line of asterisks or dashes or something to visually break up the text & show a space of time between the scenes, or maybe a line like, "A few days later..."

Just something I've noticed, and it happens quite a lot in this chapter. Maybe a change to think of in the future :)