In the interest of being helpful, a couple of corrections: The word you want is: not "peddles" but petals (...I spread her precious peddles ...) not "shutters" but "shudders" (...whole body shutters...)
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In the interest of being helpful, a couple of corrections:
The word you want is:
not "peddles" but petals (...I spread her precious peddles ...)
not "shutters" but "shudders" (...whole body shutters...)
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