I like where this is heading so hurry up and write more but make the chapters at least 2 or 3 pages long.
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Anonymous03/12/15
Contradiction!
"She had an average size figure for a girl, i suppose. "
"That was the other thing- my girl had huge tits."
In which case she definitely did NOT have "...an average size figure for a girl ..."!
Oh, one other thing!
Before Posting - PROOF READ!!
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Anonymous03/12/15
incest??
Where is the incest at in this story?? She gave head to her boyfriend not her dad or her breather.
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Anonymous03/13/15
take so lessons
on how to upload a story, you seem to have left a lot of this one on the cutting room floor
English
short but good start
I like where this is heading so hurry up and write more but make the chapters at least 2 or 3 pages long.
Contradiction!
"She had an average size figure for a girl, i suppose. "
"That was the other thing- my girl had huge tits."
In which case she definitely did NOT have "...an average size figure for a girl ..."!
Oh, one other thing!
Before Posting - PROOF READ!!
incest??
Where is the incest at in this story?? She gave head to her boyfriend not her dad or her breather.
take so lessons
on how to upload a story, you seem to have left a lot of this one on the cutting room floor
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