You did a good job for a first time .I hope you are going to do more with this story . It could be really good with some work . still good job I gave it a 4. Not bad for a first story . Keep writing and I'll keep reading .
I was just like him with my step-daughters and their live-in friend. I peeked at them in the half bath downstairs and the full one upstairs. The friend didn't seem to mind my eyes on her body since she wore the tightest outfits she had. I wish I had pictures or video now.
Please continue the story.
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Not to bad
You did a good job for a first time .I hope you are going to do more with this story . It could be really good with some work . still good job I gave it a 4. Not bad for a first story . Keep writing and I'll keep reading .
Me too
I was just like him with my step-daughters and their live-in friend. I peeked at them in the half bath downstairs and the full one upstairs. The friend didn't seem to mind my eyes on her body since she wore the tightest outfits she had. I wish I had pictures or video now.
Please continue the story.
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