Kelly and Shelton Ch. 02

Keep going please

This is a well worked story, and I am very jealous of Shelton.

Utter stupidity

Did you re-read what you wrote? He has one arm attached to a chain. Otherwise he's
free. When she got within reach he threw his free hand into her throat, crushing it and killing her instantly. It took him some time to remove the cuff but he was soon free. End of story. You seem to think that he would simply accept her torturing him. Why would that happen? It makes no sense that he wouldn't fight back and easily over power her. Dumb story.

interesting

This story represents a major fantasy of mine, therefore, I liked it. However I felt you missed a lot of oppuoppurtunities to venture into Shelton's psyche while being dominated. It could not have been nearly as easy for him to accept it as it seems from your writing. Showing his inner thoughts, fears, and desires would havemade the story sexier. Also, I think it might be an idea for her to go too far at one point and actually upset Shelton and feel remorseful, like she had let her own fantasies get out of hand.

I don't think this story is that unrealistic. Mainly becuase I could see myself losing it and dominating someone I love as a last resort. Well... it is a bit rapey. Maybe I'd end up in jail or worse as other comments suggest.

this is not intended to be "rapey" and to be clear if you experiment with this kind of play it would fall into the realm of consensual non-consent and actually, you shouldn't drug anyone period. That's what makes this a fantasy inspired by other stories on this site. You should never do anything without consent because that would be a crime.