I Drink Every Drop You Give Me

My first story...what do you think?

Hi everyone, I've been reading stories here for years, and finally got the nerve to submit one of my own. Would love to hear your thoughts and feedback.

This story is based on a fantasy of mine and while I haven't been able to make it a reality yet, I do own a dress exactly like the one in the story.

Also, as you will note at the end of the story, the party's not over. I've definitely got some fun ideas about what might happen later in the evening. ;)

- Katie

..so I would love to read how the party develops!
The start has been really good in my eyes ;-)
Short, fast, but effective.

like this initial offering

very nice job
good tease
excellent resolution
lingering images
promise of more

well done

Nice Read***

Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful

Amazing details; hope he can satisfy you the same in the upcoming story.

Keep Writing

Well written, right length (as was his cock) You've obviously done that sort of thing. I'll look forward to your next story (not to long I hope)