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by TGJamie03/11/15

Friends

I really like how they first became friends and did things together before becoming intimate, It makes the story believable. Well done.

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by Anonymous03/11/15

Well Written

Great story loved the build up and relationship they have. Love seeing Sarah stand up for her. Could you be more descriptive in things like clothes color etc. Like I was so curious was Sarah wearing pink or maybe something a bit more sexy? Other wise great story.

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by Anonymous03/16/15

good

This was a good story. However it seemed a bit rushed. You could have written a chapter humiliating the jock and another working up the relationship between the two girls. Other than that, five stars.

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