All Comments on 'The Balance Ch. 01-05'

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rightbankrightbankabout 6 years ago
Layers of Lore

It's a good night to learn to love

Horseman68Horseman68almost 6 years ago
Unique Story Beginning.

Unique and compelling. Need to see how this tale evolves.

Ramjet75Ramjet75almost 4 years ago
Interesting Mythos

I will enjoy learning this one.

LooselyhumanLooselyhumanalmost 2 years ago

"give him time to grow in confidence before you put horns on his head" really though?

thatusernameistakenthatusernameistaken4 months ago

I'm with looselyhuman on this one, albeit a year later. But I'm not gonna sugar coat it.

The story hasn't even started and you've emasculated and cucked the male lead, after making a 19 year old man come across as a literal child. Which of course is what happens with a single mother that shelters him from literally everything. Better give him some more chores every chapter so he doesn't get above himself! He might learn competence, confidence, independence and leave his mommy all alone!

1/5 and not reading further in the series.

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Hello All: Update as of May 2023. I have had people reach out to me regarding sequels to stories that I have posted on here, so let me address those first: "Mary's Innocent Passion." This is titled "Innocent Passion" on my page on Smashwords and my personal website. No seque...

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