by Glaze72
Unique and compelling. Need to see how this tale evolves.
"give him time to grow in confidence before you put horns on his head" really though?
I'm with looselyhuman on this one, albeit a year later. But I'm not gonna sugar coat it.
The story hasn't even started and you've emasculated and cucked the male lead, after making a 19 year old man come across as a literal child. Which of course is what happens with a single mother that shelters him from literally everything. Better give him some more chores every chapter so he doesn't get above himself! He might learn competence, confidence, independence and leave his mommy all alone!
1/5 and not reading further in the series.