... your idiosyncratic wording and/or spelling. Then I went to your Biography and saw your country of origin.
Can't say I like your wording but at least I understand it.
Enjoyed it very much look forward to the next installment. Only thing is your grammar, threw me for a loop your conversation in the story. Does or should it have been do?? Love the couple... in the story very hot together
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Anonymous03/15/15
poor grammar
poor grammar
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Anonymous03/17/15
grammar a-ok.
the grammar was appropriate, it surprised me at first, but it only became apparent in those passages in which you were speaking. I found myself "hearing" you speak with a foreign accent!. Cool effect. Thank you
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I was wondering about ....
... your idiosyncratic wording and/or spelling. Then I went to your Biography and saw your country of origin.
Can't say I like your wording but at least I understand it.
hot read
Enjoyed it very much look forward to the next installment. Only thing is your grammar, threw me for a loop your conversation in the story. Does or should it have been do?? Love the couple... in the story very hot together
poor grammar
poor grammar
grammar a-ok.
the grammar was appropriate, it surprised me at first, but it only became apparent in those passages in which you were speaking. I found myself "hearing" you speak with a foreign accent!. Cool effect. Thank you
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