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My Mom's Disgusting Boyfriend

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by Anonymous

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by BuzzCzar03/25/15

A Beginning

...but no ending.

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by Anonymous05/15/15

So she turned out to be a slut, and enjoyed being fucked by her mother's boyfriend no less. What a pitiful character :(

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by Anonymous05/20/15

My opinion

You are a very good writer, your play on words, intrigues, suspense and the rest but you killed it off with the slutty acceptance!
I hope to see a continuation and thus corrections!
Nice one! Its 4-star-rated!

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by Anonymous06/04/15

i just drained my balls to this,,, my gfs daughter is in yard in tight shorts and no bra , i had to cum

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by Anonymous06/09/15

Dripping...

im so wet...ur story made my dirty cunt cum soooo many times..

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by rapemymouthdaddy06/10/15

Mmmmmm, this made me cum so good. Was hoping mom'sboyfriend was going to rape her tight asshole.

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by Anonymous06/18/15

Not sex

That was rape of a vulnerable child .... That her body betrayed her did not lessen the crime.

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by Jaydia06/21/15

Damn!

That was so hot it deserves a sequel!

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Please continue this story!

Please write more to This story!
It has so much more to give in my opinion!
It is so hot & sexy..
If I could give me than 5 stars I would!!

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by Anonymous08/21/15

LOL Anon

There aren't any 55 yr old black men named Fuquan. Black folk didn't start making up ridiculous names until about 40 years ago.

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by Anonymous08/27/15

Well written.

Also, to all of the people saying they were disgusted. Think about how some people are disgusted by the things you enjoy sexually. Keep your negative opinions to yourself, that hate could easily be directed at you.

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by Anonymous09/01/15

Loved it

OMG this is soo good. I got super wet from this story. I love the details.

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by Anonymous09/23/15

more please

wanna find out what happens next. also does he bang the daughter's friend. or even better has an orgy with the mother, daughter & daughter's best friend. please write to this story

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by Anonymous12/12/15

Awesome

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.

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by Anonymous01/15/16

Ahhh

Ewww. The couch farted!!!!

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by wdbtchr03/11/16

Very enjoyable

Nice story and well paced, the thing that sent me over the top was a side thought at the point where Trey pushed his cock in her and I remembered she had already been fucked recently by her boyfriend. Sloppy seconds always turn me on.

Hope to see more, maybe with some cream pie eating or sloppy seconds. A cream filled pussy is also good start for fisting. Maybe the girlfriend or mother could take care of that after Trey fucks her again. A little voyeurism is always a nice spice to a story.

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by Anonymous03/14/16

Soaked

...what else is there to say?

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by Anonymous04/02/16

love it

Please add more to this story

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by Anonymous04/27/16

Pregnant

Maybe make Jessica pregnant in the next story to add some drama? Especially between her mom&trey and Jessica&shawn.

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by sopharoones06/16/16

not too sure

frankly the disgust she clearly has for him is too much of a distraction or deterrent from finding this story to be very erotic, it all makes me uncomfortable because she is uncomfortable, fantasy is fantasy for a good reason. the writing itself is ok though, the realism of that is bonus and if its your intention to make the reader uncomfortable then well done. thus im just not to sure how to take this story

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by Anonymous06/17/16

WET...

....and horny!! LOVED it and gave it 5 stars. The fact that she found him disgusting, but begged him to f*ck her anyway was a huge turn on for me.
Please continue this story.
kisses & wet licks
catt...(Tom's sub/slut in trainning 'shared' wife, and finally loving sex in many ways).

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slnovak:

I'VE DIDN'T READ THEE ENTIRE STORY ... ... I'VE DID READ MOST ... ... ...
now that's been said - - - - - - - - - - - - - slnovak :: you've made
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SOMEBODY JUST REBOOT THE DAMN STORY ++&& MAKE SURE
GIVE YOUR OWN TWEAKS YOUR OWN CONSTANT TWISTS
YOUR OWN CONSTANT TURNS &&++ MAKE SURE
DESCRIBE EVERYTHING YOUR DOING JUST AS GOOD AS DONE THIS
DONE HERE POSSIBLY EVEN BETTER THIS ... ... ... ... WE OBVIOUSLY
CAN'T COUNT THIS AUTHOR DOING SOMETHING
DOING ANYTHING DOING WHATEVER

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by LowSwingin09/07/16

Finish It

I enjoyed reading this. It's imperfect and it's good.

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by peebudy10/10/16

great story

great story. I lived the internal conflict of her simultaneously dispising him, and desiring him. very hot.

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by Anonymous11/02/16

Side-slut slave

That abrupt ending, while cute, is still a cop-out. This kind of thing has to "play out" over time. I would like to see him make her his side-slut slave. The conflict and the tension are all unresolved from the original story. How he might hold her in his thrall with the mother in the background is a story begging to be told.

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by Anonymous11/26/16

Ughhh

This is great you should have her and Riana fuck Trey. Have them fuck while the mams asleep in the same room or even have trey make them Mam watch. And have them have public sex

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by Ray Roberts11/26/16

Great true to life story of the bad stud v innocent young girl

This story identifies and confirms the reality of feminine innocence being overtaken by the pure lust of a rampant stud.
However much you like to define male/female relationships women are subject to being overpowered by a male lothario who is blessed with a large cock and carnal knowledge of what makes the female body work sexually.
While we can all be concerned at the mother/daughter relationship in the story the sexuality overtakes all and this is a great read. I believe both male and female readers will be able to understand and be enthralled by the story which is certainly 5* material. More, please.

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by Anonymous12/21/16

An excellent story

This story had a realness about it, that made it a delight to read.

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by Anonymous03/10/17

Read it twice

He should have taken her cherry ass since he was tongue deep in it and she was getting off on it.
Made me so hot. I'm going to ass fuck myself with a huge cucumber I bought today. I'll be thinking of Trey's big cock stretching me out.
I've had my ass ploughed thoroughly many times. I prefer being fucked in the ass, I guess I'm an ass slut!

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by Anonymous03/21/17

THE STORY IS EROTIC. THE PLOT WAS INTELLIGENTLY CONCEIVED. THE STORY WAS VERY WELL CRAFTED.

18 y/o women tend to be vulnerable to pressure of all kinds.
When early in the story the boyfriend entered her bedroom and was touching her ass, she was in a hypnotic transe of sorts. She was totally shocked and was not prepared to deal with such situations. In particular, she could imagine she would be turned on so intensely.

Bravo, sinovak, you did a fine job!

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by Anonymous04/07/17

Throbbing

My pussycat is throbbing I have always fantasized about this wish J had someone to take my pussycat like that. Dig in my ass and pussy

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by Anonymous05/29/17

Oh my god yes!

Pleeeease write a second part! I need to know what happens next so bad. I need it!

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by tazz4fun6906/05/17

more chapters

want to hear more of what happens. mayb her friend Rianna gets fucked by him too. wanna kno on what almost destroyed her family. cant end it like that & make us wonder on what happens or doesnt happen.

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by Anonymous06/13/17

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by Anonymous07/05/17

Jessica takes her mom's boyfriend away from her

My pussy was literally seeping with pussy juice as I was reading this story.
I had to stop reading it twice so that I could finger my pussy until I could cum
I very seldom give 5 stars to a story but I had to after reading the one
It actually feels like I was Jessica getting fucked.
Thank you for making my day

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by Anonymous07/19/17

Sexy Trey

Give this sex machine a bit of chest hair -- he's got a great cock, loads of stamina, and a good supply of man seed. I want the whole package!

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by slnovak07/21/17

Thanks

Thank you all for the feedback on my story over the years (now 14 years old!). Hopefully, I'll get to the rest of the story soon.

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Please continue!

I love this story!
Please continue it, the first part is just incredible and so hot!
It feels like I've been waiting years for another part of this story haha!

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by Anonymous07/27/17

Page 3 IS the story

we read through pages 1 & 2 and are rewarded with the hard core sex scene of page 3. Eventhough pages 1 & 2 could have used some of the juice from p3 the author didn't use it. Mom could have been so much nastier when the disgusting bf drills her on p1 but not. The creepy scene of p2's bedroom scene was a bit too creepy, almost painful to read - not sexy or titilating.
Yet we are rewarded with a great stretch of sex between our 2 best developed characters on p3, my only advice would be:
- let her talk dirtier to him to promote his orgasm, go wild
- drop the bush of pubes crap while she is giving head and going for his nuts, spend more time on her sucking his nuts and his over sized sex organ. Take the reader on a tour of his size and manliness, of course his size is important to the thrill factor.

Lastly, some banter between the 2 as they screw. Even throughout all the sex, a large penis banging it's way into a forbidden cherry flavored, ripe snatch like hers is something more to be screamed about from the rooftops.
Not a little, but a whole bunch. He's banging that sweet young thing after she sucked his enormously huge manly cock, after he lapped her lovely tight little womanhood.
Good p3 but I think you missed an unforgettable p3.
Thank you for a good effort. Hope to see more.
In a nut shell, cut the dribble and get them fucking and talking dirty to one another is what too many authors on this site miss.
You're better than most.

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by Anonymous08/16/17

"layed"

I lied there with Trey’s penis still inside of me, unsure what to do next. The correct word to use would be "layed" awesome story though, hope to read more of it...

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by Anonymous08/16/17

Rest of the Story

There has to be more to this story!
It even ends with "that was the Start of a 6 month..."
Really, I mean, I know it can be difficult to get back to writing mode when you been out of it .... but it is time :-D
* (encouragement) *

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Helpless to stop re-reading this...

What a torturous, base and disgusting account of a young girl doomed to give in to the will of a drunken womanizing pervert, who's power over her mother and household had her instinct to resist his advances weakened with each encounter -no matter how she tried, there was never any real chance of escape...
re-reading it over and over only enforces the reader arousal as the girl loses her will to keep her dignity and instead falls into the disgusting older mans control. His twisted victory and complete domination of the mother and daughter is beyond well told, and leaves one guilty and hungry for more.

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by Anonymous11/03/17

NEED FUCKING MORE!!!!

I read it twice came 3 times.. every time wanting more. Also wanting him to fuck her tight ass..Need more to the story .. Is she his little cum slut from then on using her when he wants .making her service his buddies.. more MORE BEED NEED MORE. oh he should of made her clean her sweet cunt juice from his cock and balls and to end that with a load of fucking cum on the back of her throat, before his returning to her mom.

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by Anonymous12/21/17

Audio Recording

This would be terrific as an audio recording with almost any woman's sexy voice.

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by Anonymous12/28/17

This is perfect

I'm actually in a situation where I'm the Jessica...it's fucking fantastic, but he thinks I'm asleep every time..this story is great, I just wish my "Trey" went past eating me out...although I have to say it feels amazing and it definitely helped during finals week.

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by Anonymous01/17/18

I DONT LIKE TREY.

HOW CAN HE BETRAY THAT WOMENS TRUST.
HOW CAN SHE BETRAY HER MOTHERS TRUST. I AM DISGUSTED.
I FELT HORNY READING THIS. IM SO DISGUSTED IN MY SELF.
I DONT EVEN KNOW HOE I GOT TO THIS PAGE 😳😭😭😭😭😭😭.

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by Anonymous02/06/18

more

say, many chapters later, mom marries Trey and he fucks the Jessica the night before the wedding, an hour before the wedding, and again after the wedding once in the church and again at the reception. I dont like him either, but once she started begging him to fuck her over and over, I'm all for him fucking her in every way as much as possible. It would be cute if Riana joined for a threesome and Jessica got jealous.

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by Anonymous03/11/18

Listen up

Ok people if you listened she said "that was the start of a 6 mounth odyssey which almost destroyed my family" meaning hat was when Ithe started it lasted 6 mounths and it almost destroyed her family so the mum must of found out

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by Anonymous03/16/18

Very good!

When reading stories the reader should become a part of the story. This story was written to engage the reader. Very good story line. Keep writing as you may write a master piece Solid 5.


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