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by Anonymous03/17/15

Very good start

Since English isn't your first language you are doing very well. A few wrong word choices, and some awkward phrasing, but still an excellent start. I speak 2 languages other than English and in neither one could I write as well as you have in English. Keep trying and learning!

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