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Helen - A Pain in the Ass

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by Anonymous

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by chytown03/15/15

What Was That!!

This was a pain to read.

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by Anonymous03/15/15

Have to agree

It was a real chore to read. Not sure who you are trying to emulate. Or are you trying to create a new style of writing where the reader has to do a lot of work?

Try again and maybe it will be easier to read, understand and not be such a struggle.

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by Anonymous03/21/15

Awful

Language issues aside, this was godawful!

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