This was a pain to read.
It was a real chore to read. Not sure who you are trying to emulate. Or are you trying to create a new style of writing where the reader has to do a lot of work? Try again and maybe it will be easier to read, understand and not be such a struggle.
Language issues aside, this was godawful!
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What Was That!!
This was a pain to read.
Have to agree
It was a real chore to read. Not sure who you are trying to emulate. Or are you trying to create a new style of writing where the reader has to do a lot of work?
Try again and maybe it will be easier to read, understand and not be such a struggle.
Awful
Language issues aside, this was godawful!
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