All Comments on 'Poolside Ch. 03, Pt. 1'

Dear Leo I like this story sofar, especially our hero giving Bud a

good kicking with his boot, you mentioned earlier his teacher warning him off these young girls as they have very powerful fathers, it seems he's fallen right into the trap, Oh what wonderous

webs we weave,when we set out to, deceive, comes to mind

you also mentioned that a lot of your stories are taken from real life you must be very observant, but thats an authors license isn't

it So far a beautifully told story please keep the good work,

A slight aside before I go Please don't forget ERICA

Love Jem

Wow most creative and sexy!

Mr. Super Stud becomes Knight in Shining Armor to rescue the young damsel.

Hero's reward is to get the damsel's mother, and, I presume, in the next Part to deflower the damsel.

All the while keeping power magnate, vindictive, adulterous Daddy in the dark as a friend.

LeoDavis has done it again.

Paul in Oklahoma