All Comments on 'Poolside Ch. 03, Pt. 3'

Talk about what wonderous webs we weave, that has nothing on this lot GOSH what a manipulative shower, the earlier part of the chapter got me going as usual wet knickers type of thing , but the arrival of the mother & aunt now that was a crusher, your stories are certainly a roller coaster ride. I can't praise your talent high

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Love Jem

The only mistake your protagonist made, was by NOT running like a scared rabbit on his first visit to 'Mommas' house, especially after catching the 'look' from her.---As for the 'rip - their - hearts - out - at - the - hotel' scene, well, I'm afraid Momma would have died that day, if she pulled that horseshit on me. But hey, that's just my take on things.