I enjoyed it. As a fantasy and/or erotic story it's ok - fairly well written and good descriptions/details. But shouldn't there actually be a wife in a Loving Wives story?
The short of it is this: Would the author be happy if it was her husband slowing women to take pleasure from his body but then said he didn't fuck any of them?
Maybe she would be fine with it, not judging but I am curious.
Sorry...I can't believe it...1st - He dumps her just one week after he left to Japan...His love wasn't strong enough to wait for her just a few months? 2nd - and even with this she says it was fate that had driven them apart? 3rd - she was devastated with it and when found him again only thought to reward him by dumping her years before? 4th - She got nude with him in her room and he only saw, kissed her and left? Why lie to us? we aren't the husband...5th - A woman that do this in her wedding day, is in love with the future husband? If she does this in this day what will she be doing when married? 6th - What she didn't thought was that he dumped her and never thought about her, nor tryed to contact her...1*
Not a bad story, though a little brief and not description of the character of the husband.
Of course there is aftermath from this little encounter to consider for the bride and her husband too be !
I do realize that these are just stories, fiction. If this were for real, why would we believe that this is a last fling? And what about the husband who unbeknownst to her, is getting the best blowjob of his life and his ashes hauled 2 hours before the wedding. I wonder how she would react? I will bet she would come unglued! :)
English
Boring**
Thanks for the read.
Huh?
Was this actually a tale?
Wow...
...I will surely find this one interesting, - as soon as I figure out, what the heck you wrote!
Just wondering...
I enjoyed it. As a fantasy and/or erotic story it's ok - fairly well written and good descriptions/details. But shouldn't there actually be a wife in a Loving Wives story?
What a whore....
If she wants to play around then she should just stay single.
It seems a matter of semantics.
The short of it is this: Would the author be happy if it was her husband slowing women to take pleasure from his body but then said he didn't fuck any of them?
Maybe she would be fine with it, not judging but I am curious.
Sorry...I can't believe it...
Sorry...I can't believe it...1st - He dumps her just one week after he left to Japan...His love wasn't strong enough to wait for her just a few months? 2nd - and even with this she says it was fate that had driven them apart? 3rd - she was devastated with it and when found him again only thought to reward him by dumping her years before? 4th - She got nude with him in her room and he only saw, kissed her and left? Why lie to us? we aren't the husband...5th - A woman that do this in her wedding day, is in love with the future husband? If she does this in this day what will she be doing when married? 6th - What she didn't thought was that he dumped her and never thought about her, nor tryed to contact her...1*
Enjoyed it, be it ever so brief.
Too Brief.....
Not a bad story, though a little brief and not description of the character of the husband.
Of course there is aftermath from this little encounter to consider for the bride and her husband too be !
A last fling?
I do realize that these are just stories, fiction. If this were for real, why would we believe that this is a last fling? And what about the husband who unbeknownst to her, is getting the best blowjob of his life and his ashes hauled 2 hours before the wedding. I wonder how she would react? I will bet she would come unglued! :)
If this was all real , of course.
C
Selfish, ugly, and stupid
If this kind of betrayal combined with rewarding a shallow thug turns you on, best get your head examined.
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