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I'm enjoying this...
Just wish the chapters were longer. Please hurry with chapter 6. :)
More please...
You have to keep going! I want Thalia to get mad at him, the makeup wasn't her doing--I know she's terrified, rightly so, but it doesn't seem to be her nature to be so cringingly meek and easily crushed. I hope she stands up to him when she acclimates to her new surroundings. And it's very interesting that the Arktzirax have so clear an idea of what their females are like despite no females of their species being born in generations, if I understand the history. Are they all indoctrinated from youth, and is that why his response was so angry and uncontrolled? I also really liked, despite her fear, it occurred to Thalia to worry about the fate of the other vessels. I hope securing their safety is something she can work towards. So fascinated, please keep writing!!!
Merit
Well written and an intriguing read!!! Can't wait for more!!
Thanks!
Thank you for all the feedback! I am currently rewritting chapters 6-10. I will submit them soon! I am taking your advise to heart and making the chapters longer....but that means a longer wait time between chapters! Sorry!
~NeverEvers
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