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sad.
Turned out he was a puss after all. A puss with a slut wife and a lying betraying daughter. What a grand life.
Flat ending to hitherto solid story !
I'm not against reconciliation stories, in fact I favor them. But in this case, the wife's redeeming virtues weren't expounded on enough to make the conclusion plausible. It seemed ' no matter what ' this was predetermined. The potentially great scene of reckoning with the lying daughter was also left on table.
Overall this a fine read with a few hiccups punctuating each installment. It's a bit of a puzzle how this author will mix consecutive bravura scenes, then a clunker. Unfortunately the last installment had the most oppsies' . There's no doubt, however, + a good editor ~ this author could go pro.
Started quite powerful..
...but lost more and more with each new chapter. Mostly he travels from city A to B, then to C, back to A etc. I felt the story stopped developing at times. The ending was flat..She was fucking around by the dozen and he actually thought about reconcilation? Hard to believe..
Betrayed by
daughter and mother. And they get back together. No way.
very funny story
This shit was hilariously bad im laughing at how stupid this was. he watched her cheating and took pictures for months and does nothing with them! Then he shows the wife the pictures and she denies it and gets mad at him for spyin on her. After that in which she never apologises or says she loves him he leaves basically saying come find me when youre ready to talk. When they finally talk he just forgives her with no remorse on her part. What the situation worse is his daughter and his wifes sister knew about the affair and the wife sister was involved in it.
Yea, this garbage was funny but this shit still fucks up the LW category [but why bother, the moderators don't give a shit].
This putrid shit is just the symptom of this cock sucking fag author's mentality.
Stupid
These stories make me want to side with the BTB crowd.
Agree with @javmor79...
Agree with @javmor79...He should have divorced that woman, destroyed her and the lover, and don't think about the sons, because they were already emancipated!!! How could he accept her back? Was he afraid to get lonely? Better alone than in bad company...
Question?
Who is John Galt?
Great question, Seekeraz
You have the ability to find out for yourself. You have the power. You do.
wimpy hubby and whore of a wife.
Really Didn't Like It
Have to agree with anonymous, those two deserve each other
Thank God
Thank God this worthless asshole has stopped writing... I can only hope this fag died of a horrible disease.....
Sorry
She never said it, he never asked her to. Unlikely she would desire reconciliation or succeed at it. Unlikely he would offer it in the face of all the lies.
Sorry is what this story is.
Sorry I had to tell you. 2 stars for the amusing old time high tech he used.
Fucking pathetic story.
The fucking kid and sister help the wife cheat on him.
Fuck all of them.
Garbage
This absolute joke of an author is just a cuck fag wimp ready to RAAC no matter how wrong the cheating whore slut is....... Mother fucker, I hope your wife daughter and mother leave you for a gangbang with bikers or BBC.......
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