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by Anonymous

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by Hurbster03/11/15

Usual non consensual vampire fascination stuff.

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by Anonymous03/13/15

love it

Gimme more and don't change a thing.

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by FaithWhite03/15/15

Short and sweet

But just sounds like most of the bedroom scenes from twilight with actual sexual relations thrown in. Another vampire story. This could go either way....really good....or...really bad.

We shall see.

Keep writing and don't give up yet. I'm curious to see where this goes. Ch.2 will makeit or break it.

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