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All Comments on 'Free Falling'

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HurbsterHurbsterabout 9 years ago

Usual non consensual vampire fascination stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
love it

Gimme more and don't change a thing.

FaithWhiteFaithWhiteabout 9 years ago
Short and sweet

But just sounds like most of the bedroom scenes from twilight with actual sexual relations thrown in. Another vampire story. This could go either way....really good....or...really bad.

We shall see.

Keep writing and don't give up yet. I'm curious to see where this goes. Ch.2 will makeit or break it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

OK, whats the deal? Please don't let this linger. I was on the edge of my seat. Please don't leave us hanging.

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 7 years ago
Ah, okay, you're one of those that never finishes stories.

I get it.

You are one of hundreds.

I've glanced at your stories. You never go to completion with any.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

You story is good. I cant wait to see what happens next and whats up with the town

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