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The Marriage Ch. 07

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by Anonymous

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by cliquegge03/12/15

Superb ...

As usual.
I don't know what I am going to do when this finishes - each night (Australia) I look for the next instalment ... and smile when I see it ... thanks for this - I am still enjoying the series.

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by Doctime03/12/15

Ditto

I agree with cliquegge. It is interesting that Lit is read all over the world. Again, sorry to be limited to only five stars. I am both looking forward to, and also dreading the final two chapters.

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by Doctime03/12/15

I should have qualified "dreading." It's because I do not want this adventure to end.

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by bruce2203/13/15

We seem to be in the eye of the hurricane

Believe it or not this very complex marriage has got me wondering. Could have Uri been in love in Lylle and for this reason he is so angry with his broken sister.

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by ChubChubsDaddy03/13/15

Amazing Story - Horrible English

Thankfully someone else is proofing this story- it needs it, but if you get past that, you can't stop reading this wonderful work. I, also, believe Uri has had it for Mylle and is jealous of his sister and I think they are all gonna keep it "in the family" soon... Can't wait for more chapters to see where the story goes.

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by Anonymous03/15/15

what of the consul. Will not the commoners rise.

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by TheOldRomantic09/20/16

Again, I still haven´t found what I´m looking for... (yet)

5* for you.

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