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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/12/15

Love this... very hot.

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by Shibnicity03/13/15

Great ideas. Needs editing.

This was a great read, it gave me quite the release. I know I've always fantasized about certain friends doing this to me in my sleep. There are occasional grammatical errors that made reading moderately difficult. You may want to consider breaking up some of your sentences connected by commas into separate sentences. In spite of that you have an excellent sense of Imagery.

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by Anonymous03/14/15

Awesome

Sexy. Should write a sequel. would love more stories about women doing this to men

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by Anonymous04/03/15

Sequel would be great.

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