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Found this series interesting.....
....but I honestly feel husband Don isn't enlightened, he just has a bigger pussy than his wife does. And instead of he's "comfortable in his own skin", it's more like he's comfortable in his own skirt. Just my opinion.
Great story-! Would love to see more
Dear Lue-
I would just like to say a few things about the criticism you have been subjected to here. I am talking about what I see as moral disapproval of what your characters are doing. I don't understand why, for the life of me, people who have a deep sense of moral indignation regarding activities such as "Cuckolding", "cheating" or indeed sex with one other than one's husband or wife would bother reading stories in the "Loving Wives" category. It must be similar to the satisfaction felt by those in years past who wagged their fingers, or worse, to those unfortunates stuck in "the stocks" back in Puritan times. I can only guess at the motives of such people. Maybe some have been on the short end of a love triangle before, or had someone leave them for another. I think many of us have had similar experiences. I know I have! But I think chastising an author for a well-written story about an adult situation that many married couples face, one way or another, is just wrong. That's how I feel about it.
I'd also like to say thank you for writing this story just as you have! I found it sexy, stimulating and compelling. I appreciate the way you described the complex dynamics happening between Lue and Don, as Lue grapples with her feelings as the relationship- and love affair- between her and Ray unfolds. This is so much like what happens in real life, in my experience, that I would not at all be surprised to hear it followed closely the author's own experiences. The story is realistic and moving.. erotic and believable. I find myself caring about what Lue and Don feel, and what happens to their relationship. Thank you, and my vote is for you to please continue!
Thanks Imagine 73
I have tried to take my readers through the conflicting thoughts a woman goes through when feeling that her life has become mundane and she is offered the opportunity of excitement, even though she knows chasing that excitement is illicit.
It happens. But her conflicted thoughts don't get much sympathy on this site.
To @luedon...
You know I was one of the people that didn't like the plot and the characters of this story...But that is one thing...The other is the way you write...Your writing is good, easy to read. That's why your story had so many comments. That would make a writer happy...Worst than a bad comment is no comment at all. I think that a writer moto should be: "Love me or hate me, but don't ignore me...". You for sure weren't ignored. I think that you should write part 6 also: How the other wife view and dealt with her husband cheat while she was pregnant...
Sorry, impo_60
In my story, Julie never found out. She just thought that Ray had formed a friendship with Luellen and, through her, with Donald.
So I can't write her story. And, even if she had found out, I doubt that I could see inside her mind as I could with Lue/Lucy. I don't have a particularly good imagination.
And for those who were worried about the children, in my story they never found out either.
Ok...@luedon
These three are very lucky...They should go to Vegas and play hard...I'm sure they would win the Jackpot...
@impo_60
You would either be surprised, or you would doubt, that many/most couples who participate in extra-marital activities suffer no ill consequences (such as divorce, STD's, violence, murders, etc.). I understand that my opinion is based on anecdotal evidence, and that it is not necessarily typical, but it seems that most of the time, these types of stories end much less dramatically than you might imagine.
And that, I think, is the problem with these stories. If they are written true-to-life, then there is no drama or conflict. Add a little dramatic license, though, and you can create conflict as an author. So the question is: do you want to write a realistic story or a dramatic story? I enjoy both.
Only one solution
The world would be better without that triple. So my offer would have been to either execute and eliminate these pack or to sell them as breeding slaves to Africa - to give their lives a true sense.
swingerjoe is just full of shit.
They are not both fucking around, husband is a little fag punk, not necessarly true in most marriages. The biggest problem is the kids, they would know what was going on and their would be a lot of damage, and these marriages always end.
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