Well I enjoyed it, as I did all your other stories.
I want to take issue with the previous two "commenters" .... I'll keep it simple as clearly neither of you have sufficient brain-power to process anything too difficult. You haven't contributed any stories (for which we are all deeply thankful), so you have absolutely no right to make snide, negative comments. If you haven't got anything pleasant or interesting to say then f**k off, it's not rocket science.
It's***
A Read.
Very disappointing.
Boring crap. Line a idiot to the dentists office, just glad its over.
Superb
Well I enjoyed it, as I did all your other stories.
I want to take issue with the previous two "commenters" .... I'll keep it simple as clearly neither of you have sufficient brain-power to process anything too difficult. You haven't contributed any stories (for which we are all deeply thankful), so you have absolutely no right to make snide, negative comments. If you haven't got anything pleasant or interesting to say then f**k off, it's not rocket science.
Rant over.
Please!
"We couldn't keep our bodies apart". Seriously?
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