It was a hot story. But the grammar mistakes took a lot away from it. If not for them, I'd have given you a higher vote. You're still a good storyteller. Keep up the good work.
Excellent story, well done :D
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Hot story
It was a hot story. But the grammar mistakes took a lot away from it. If not for them, I'd have given you a higher vote. You're still a good storyteller. Keep up the good work.
Excellent
Excellent story, well done :D
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