Soluble

That's MORE like it!! LOL

Excellent premise, outstanding results!!

Excellent

Hope there's more!

well played !

I would have enjoyed seeing just a bit more of Lauren's b***** side , before the narrator swatted her off the pedestal. However, Ashson wasn't taking the scenic route. Every scene had verve , however, so it's hard to quarrel too much. Full marks !

Clever - and well written.

Another good one

Would have loved to see more of the bitch side too. I enjoy the strong bitchy personality defeated and broken. But your stories are usually more to the point which is not always a terrible thing. Good job. Thanks!