Katie's Brother

Good read!! Please continue with More.

make it longer

great start.... I think you might have rushed it a bit though. I suggest rewritting this story...slow the pace down...show how the sister wanted to / desired for... her brother. describe the brother and sister more... hair eyes...and so on. you could milk this into a much longer story.

i kind of like the lack of charater description.

I think it was a good thing to keep the physical appearance of your characters to a minimum. Personally the description some give take way from the story(cock 8 inches or 8.1 or whatever, 5'8" 34G cup). I mean really, and not everyone views what another views as desirable. So leaving that up to your readers imagination was a good thing in my opinion. I've also read about a few authors that use a just their character names, thoughts, and actions, using those as a clue to what they may look like in the mind if a reader. I think we all kind of have our own personal idea of what someone may look like based off of actions and thoughts.

I would have liked to know what became of these two