Sex Slave Lottery Ch. 01

To be continued?

hmmm

a whole different slant on it and thoroughly readable i enjoyed this even if it was a bit short

Great

Excellent premise. Can't wait for part 2.

Good start

Yes. A good start and a good premise. I do hope you continue with this story

Wow! Really Hot!

This is a great setup! Very dirty writing! And well-written as well!

It's pretty clear from hints like "When the things I am writing about started..." and the details about each of the three girlfriends that they are all going to take a chance on life for the big bucks. I'm lovin' it!

Good start, several comments

Perfect idea I like those public tv shows-competition games.
Do not focus on the fictional country details, it sounds stupid unless it is sci-fi/fantasy story (even then let readers fantasy to draw the environment).
I thing the most potent part if this story is the game and change in psychic of woman.
I miss any form of rising the stakes (as they are playing "all-in" Russian roulette game from very beginning). They shall start with some soft-core variant of the game in the states (just risk of public nudity only). When the characters become gamblers, or in other need for bigger cash they might join the "underground" version of the game abroad. To keep feeling of reluctance and humiliation one of characters may be forced to join girls later and start directly in the underground version.
The parts of story that offer most of excitement - :"the play", writing for numbers are somehow skipped and wrapped up into several sentences (like nothing passed second round, escaped in third and nothing happened, got her money, etc. ), I'm sure that main character will feel the time in different way waiting for the numbers will be never-ending.
The lottery process may involve girls more, like each has to spin the wheel (where are some fields marked "strip article of clothing" or she can win some money), game will continue unless the half of the girls are undressed to required level (other girls can collect their money and they are safe).