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The Conception Deception Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by cindylynn3403/13/15

wierd story

im curious to read your next chapter

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by Anonymous03/13/15

Yay, you are back with a bang! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. Best of luck!

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by MitchFraell03/13/15

Good

I would have thought that Claire, being so careful, would have insisted on having Russell's ability checked before entering into the contract. Russell should also have wanted to be sure Claire was not already pregnant and was SDI free. Let's see how this works out.

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by Anonymous03/14/15

Just ok I guess

well written but didn't really interest me. I'll probably read the next chapter to give it another try but not expecting much.

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by Tw0Cr0ws03/14/15

odd

She didn't have him checked for fertility, as thorough and cold as she is about this, it would be expected.

With the way she is going about it, no actual sex, the chance is low that she will get pregnant, the female having orgasms raises the chance about four times more than when she doesn't.

She seems to be going out of the way to handicap the process.

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by bogusguy03/15/15

interesting!

Very well written with a good twist at the end. You had stated that she assumed the exgirlfriend's kid was his so that should have answered the other commenters' statement about why she didn't have a fertility test done on him

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by Anonymous03/15/15

I hate when you use cum as a noun.

You're an exceptional writer, but when you write phrases like "she got a few good cums" or "my cum was small." It makes my cringe. I actually had a very difficult time reading, and enjoying Dotties's story because cum was constantly used in that context. I find it icky and gross and not sexy at all. Just my opinion. Though you may not care in the least. Thought I'd share it because I truly love your writing. Strange Arrangement is my favorite story on Literotica.

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by Anonymous03/15/15

Love it! Very good, interesting, and new plot!
You're a natural storyteller!
Looking forward for the next chaptersss!!!!

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by Tw0Cr0ws03/16/15

why didn't she

Why didn't she just have him masturbate and squirt it in with a turkey baster?

That is the low buck method women use when they get sperm from a sperm bank and don't want to pay a doctor to do it.

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by Anonymous03/18/15

Lawyer here

A woman cannot waive child support the way it's described in this story. This has been tried, it's been litigated, it's gone pretty high up. Men cannot do anonymous sperm donation outside of a medical context. In order to avoid child support, paternity suits, etc., sex cannot be involved and a doctor must be involved.

I know its a story, but this is a consistent theme on this site and it drives me crazy every time.

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by bruce2203/27/15

A very nice concept

The anonymous donor market became complicated when DNA identification became viavel. No agreement will stand up in court if the child has needs. The way it is described it does not sound like much fun... Let's see the rest of the story

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