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Gloryhole Mommy

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by Anonymous

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by writerjab03/13/15

AWESOME!!!

Like always you sexy writer!!!

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by Anonymous03/13/15

WOW

Again you have out done yourself...Every story you have written is nothing but awesome.....Your the best and I hope you continue this story.

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by boaman00703/13/15

Great job

I really enjoy and appreciate your stories. Hopefully there's more installments with this one? Another fantastic story. Thanks!

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by mexbearlll03/13/15

GREAT

keep the story going you're doing great.

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by Anonymous03/13/15

Double WOW!

Super Hot! Need more!

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by Anonymous03/13/15

It's amazing how Moms always know where the gloryholes are lol

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by Anonymous03/13/15

ABSURD BORDERING ON SILLY

The entire "Glory Hole," genre is a gay dream revelation. And, as such, Mommy sucking off anyone without restriction does not work. You can do better.

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by Anonymous03/13/15

great

Great story, though I would reword the final sentence to seem more formal

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by Anonymous03/13/15

Seven compliments ! One critic.

I liked it. The teen years. The appreciation of a fine cock. Her hunger. His fulfillment. She is and will be his. But there ought to be a way she could treat his friends too. After all, they led him to her. Blindfold, anyone????

Thanks Don

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by bonnietaylor203/13/15

boading on silly like your ficking statement dear annony!!

gave it a 5 for effort and content

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by live4thebj03/13/15

Everyone else can but h and moan

I loved it. *****

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by girdlelover03/13/15

Again

You have definitely proved you know how to write great porn!

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by wrc26403/13/15

too short

You do need to continue. He should share with his pals, and then she should arrange for the other hot mom to help her satisfy all the boys.

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by Anonymous03/13/15

10 stars!!!!

5 stars isn't enough for this one!! Had to go 10!!!
Great job! This is a Hall of Famer for sure.

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by Sex4lf5703/14/15

Fucking hot!! Loved it! Five+ stars.

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by Rawmaster5003/14/15

5 stars

Yes you should continue the story as hot as it is for me and other fans. Sexy momma and horny domineering son make for a good cast of characters. Wondering if he will let his friends know or not. All sorts of naughtiness can happen here. Thank you

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by Anonymous03/14/15

Hot hot

love those hot incest stories the only bad thing is she is denying those young men of a great blow job keep on trucking I look forward to further adventures tenbears43

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by Anonymous03/14/15

Great story

Please write more. I love your slut whore mommy

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by Anonymous03/14/15

needs a tad

Needs a tad of work to fix a serious flaw of using localize terms not internationally known ones.

Cum = orgasm/semen
Cumming = orgasm

NOT spunk, come etc for the above listed terms.

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by vikster8903/14/15

Wow!

That was fucking unbelievable. So hot!! One of the best things about your work is the dirty talk. Keep it filthy!

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Cum vs come

Actually real grammar rules imply:
Come is the act of orgasm
Cum is what is released

Regardless it seems rather redundant to the actually story because niether is actual wrong.

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by kevinhill2403/14/15

I was pissed when V got cancelled too!!!

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by Anonymous03/14/15

For the most part very good, but why him

I mean the sex scenes are great. While I guess an argument could be made that her capitulation was rather abrupt, given what she’s been doing the last few weeks, a stronger argument could be made that she sees the rather odd logic to what his solution.

However, she’s been sucking off guys for several weeks. You made a point of her stating this was to be the first man other than her husband to fuck her in years. You also made a point to state he has a 7" cock. Normally that would be a good thing, compared to the cliché of the ginormous cocks, but, I’m thinking “why him?”What, he has the biggest cock she’s sucked over the last few weeks? Sure, it’s actually a bit above the norm, but not so much he’d be considered hung. What was so special about him that, without knowing who it was, this was the guy she finally decided to fuck. While, as I said, it’s a cliché, in this case, having an enormous dick may have been a plus.

Sure, it can be a coincidence. Coincidences are the bedrock of most fiction. The characters just happen to be at that place at that time. (The one example in my head right now is Die Hard. They just happen to target the office building he just happens to be visiting on that day.) It’s a coincidence she’s doing this at that adult book store. (Frankly, though, unless it’s the only one in the area, it’s kinda stupid of her going to one so close to his school – especially if she was trying to keep it a secret. Her car’s a little too recognizable.)

Of course, I guess the best response to my “why him?” question is, “It’s a MacGuffin. Deal with it.”

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by Anonymous03/15/15

SSL knows the truth of the saying

For any boy, a cocksucking mother is the gift that keeps on giving.

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by Anonymous03/15/15

Disappointing - doesn't really seem tied to April Fools theme at all.

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by khaled_temp03/15/15

A suggested twist

I think for an April fool story, it could have developed as fucking his mother's twin sister, whom he didn't know existed because his mom was protecting him from her porn star sister. He could end up fucking his mom but with a different flow of events. Or maybe this could be another story :)

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by klippert03/15/15

one more hole

She has three holes...plenty of twists and turns for this story....take her back to the GH and watch her suck his buddies... at home turn her into a ass licking slut...and stretch her back-hole with his big cock...

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by Anonymous03/15/15

Sequel

Great premise for a story series as Ralph's & Joey's moms could also be Gloryhole Mommies and Melvin's mom and Melvin could be the ones setting them up for incest.

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by Anonymous03/16/15

Let Down.

Gloryhole Mommy aka "The Town Bicycle," was disappointingly average, made worse coming from a very good writer. No mystery, with little to no tie with the April Fools theme, with all of the story summed up in the title, developing exactly as expected.

It's pretty "paint by numbers," which is a shame. SSL usually produces better writing.

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by NormanDPlume03/17/15

Great

More please. Loved it!

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by bucco4003/17/15

More please

Would love to see another chapter and more development of the D/s relationship.

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by legmanian03/18/15

Great New Story

I think this is a brilliant new idea for a storyline. Can't wait for the next instalment!

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by Anonymous03/20/15

AMAZING!!

Silk Stockings Lover - you NEVER cease to amaze me with the depth of knowledge you seem to possess on everything related to fucking!! I LOVE your writing - dealing with an erection almost the entire way through reading them and then filling my hand with cum! You are my "go to" source for erotic fuck tales as you NEVER disappoint! I had questions about this one until I learned who was on the other side of the wall sucking his cock - then I knew I would love your professional (and fucking hot) method of dealing with a "ticklish" situation involving a mom, a son, a hard cock and a wet pussy! The only obvious answer was "fill that pussy with hot cum" and you did it well!!!!

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by ansdguy03/24/15

Amazing...

Just how quickly a teenage virgin can turn into a sadistic prick. This story started out good but went downhill fast.

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by bills4704/05/15

very hot

I wish I was the mom

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by Anonymous04/06/15

Love the idea of fucking a super-hot fuckslut mommy!

Thanks, Silk Stiockings Lover for showing me just how fucked up and depraved I really am! This super-hot, super-sexy story should have disgusted me but instead it got my cock so hard I didn't have to stroke it much to get a handful of cum!!

You ALWAYS inspire an old man's cock to do what it's not supposed to be able to do and I LOVE your fuck-inspired hot writing! Keep up the fuck work, we all love them!

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by great lover04/08/15

I laughed and laughed

this story is pretty humorous.

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by Anonymous04/14/15

Hot till it turned to shit…!

Kinda hot till you turned the stupid kid into a dominant male ass-whole in a few short words… then it went straight down hill…. you have two story sets intermixing making both stupid and disappointing….. when you had a little boy with the older woman (horny sexy mother) … inexperienced and passive that is getting lucky… that was seriously hot an good…. stay that direction then explore the other type of guy separately….. Then he could be dominant from the beginning.

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by animal9904/29/15

Wonderful story

Thanks Silk.. for another wonderful story. You have a talent for writing stories... even depraved one's :) I thought I lost touch with you, on that other board - Glad to see I found you in a familiar place!

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by Anonymous05/03/15

Lol

I laughed at the part about the scrambled porn. I used to do that too everytime i went over to my cousins house since we didnt have cable back them. Ahh, the gool ol days.

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by rezakhezri05/18/15

very nice

I must get you 100 percent for your imagination of making an incest come true. Unfortunately I haven't any sisters and my mom (although she was a very beautiful and hot woman), when I grown up she had cancer and very sick. But everytime I see my family albums, I can't deny that if she was younger and not sick...

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by Vik33305/23/15

Great story. Any chance of a part 2? That would be awesome.

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by hotbox3005/30/15

Very Hot

Please do write more parts and include kinky scenes like bdsm, master-slave, oil wrestling , deepthroat and anal.Also put a lesbian scene where the mother seduces sons naive asian or african friend later followed by a kinky threesome between the son, mother and the girl.

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by FetishLover7706/04/15

Amazing

SilkStockingsLover is an amazing writer and story-teller. This is just one of the many that have me throbbing. Please don't stop writing!

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by badgerer7506/19/15

But, But Ahhh

The age of Discovery and, Surprise.

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by Dark_Storm06/23/15

Talk about a blast from the past!

Ah, the memories. Chevettes, "V" being cancelled and gloryholes before the fear of AIDS ruined the party.

I loved the story and would love to read about their "crazy sex-filled weekend".

Keep 'em cumming, Jas. ;-)

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by Anonymous07/11/15

Hot but Less Hyde and More Jekyll

This is a hot story, by far, but page 2 was a complete 180. This nerdy kid who was nervous enough to hide his face when leaving the adult shop and bragged about chess suddenly becomes this dominant player. I mean, c'mon, man.

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by Anonymous07/14/15

Another Chapter

Please add another chapter to this story. The story is very hot and one more chapter would be a great addition to your works.

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by Anonymous08/25/15

Happy ending

Glad it ended this way. Happy to see that his friends had her mouth. How many others had she had. Hope a lot. After a while you should have all your friends share your whore mother. Let her go back and suck all dicks and watch their faces when they come out. Be happy you have a mom tht can suck and fuck like see does. When you get married let your wife and mother both be your whores for you and friends..

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by gondaol09/12/15

Tooooooo Short

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